Week 3 Part A: Aesthetics, Design, and Branding

Rover 6 P Cars


The three potential problems seen with this website are as follows:
  • lack of fluidity of the page
  • not appealing to look at
  • bad links to extra pages
The page to me is most likely not done professionally these three problems I have found are just the start of why I do not think it is done professionally.  Let start with the lack of fluidity to the page, meaning how blocky it is and every bit of text is over images or don't have the pop to the text making it blend with the background art.  The page contact information is halfway down the home page and if you are not reading everything it definitely would blend in with all the other text.  But had they done what most good websites do they have a link at the top that normally says contact us which would then send you to the bottom of the page where everything is in the neat footer or to another page with all the information needed.  The next big thing is the text is not all the same and different sizes and colors font types and just not neat once so ever.  This being part of the appealing to look problem, if I owned one of these cars this would be hands down the last place I would buy my parts from even if it is cheaper.  Cheaper does not always mean better or quality which in this case I wouldn't even bother finding out because it doesn't look professional at all.

To fix the problems on this page, here are a few that I would start with and why:
  • the font - I would change the font to all one type of font, the size would be changed based on the relevance to the page.
  • the dozens of pictures of the different cars - I would make a link on the home page to take you to an album of pictures and maybe give a description of each car and what was done to it by the shop
  • background - I would change the background to an image of this car fully done up nice and have it where all the text on the page would flow over it nicely and that it was the entire background of the screen
  • the scrolling text - that scrolling text box information needs something whether the boxes should be bigger and across the top or bottom of the page but it just isn't doing it for me the way they are laid out right now.
Jamalin


The three potential problems seen with this website are as follows:
  • sizing of the webpage
  • top of the page not really matching the website URL
  • usage of space
The page is got a lot going on in a very small amount of the page and is not utilizing the entire browser, seems as if it is meant for a phone versus a computer screen.  The web page has so much going on on the page I really can not get what this website is mainly for, I see I see skincare, I see what seems to be spiritual journey stuff, and I even make money hoax. The page has a lot of dead space to me and it's all bunched up and needs to use all of the pages.  The top of the page that you could consider a heading is very useless and doesn't even give you a clear thought of what the page is.  

To fix the problems on this page, here are a few that I would start with and why:
  • the page usage - I would start with making the page take up the entire screen and use all the dead space of the page so everything doesn't so on top of one another.
  • title of the page - I would give the page a title across the top with a bar that scrolls down as you scroll down the page, this will help people realize what kind of page they are on.
  • the size of the text - with you using more of the page you could make the text a little larger, if this page is for people to ageless skincare then they must be referring to the older market and their vision may be bad as well and all the text is so small.
Headhunter hair styling


The three things that were done right by this website are as follows:
  • simple and catchy home page
  • easy links to social media and yelp
  • great colors and layers on text and images
This page is very eye-catching and is very smooth with the color pallet.  The page flows so easy and everything is radiable and provides easy access around the webpage.  It is a great page with an active video background that can catch your attention easily. Like that the bottom of the home page has links for the different social media along with their yelp page that gives you great reviews on the place. This is what a professional site looks like, without a doubt. 

The pages brand and the layout of this website are very catchy and provide an easy read that will make people want to use this hair salon without any question.  The designs on the page are very catchy and will be appealing to almost anyone. the brand is a good brand nothing too complicated and not overwhelming, and the name is very catchy.

Toyota


Three things that were done right by this website are as follows:
  • the page interaction is amazing
  • organization of everything 
  • usage of the entire page properly
Of course, this is a professionally done page as you will see by all the interaction and everything the page has on it.  The colors are sharp and the images are great, there are no blocks behind images the background gets attention but not too much.  There are so many links and things to do and go through on the page.  the website uses all of the CRAPHTED.

Everyone knows the brand hands down and the logo is just a simple but you put it in the air everyone can pick it out.  The design and flow of the page are so easy to get around and all the links have great following pages. The page definitely grabs attention and it is good to be able to navigate very easily.


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